Freedom flows like liquid in my veins,
Pain makes my nerve look green,
Commiting myself to my mother Nation,
I have inscribed my life to all incarnations.
Torn between the battle of country and life,
Rolling up my sleeves, I toil all night,
Despite of craving to see my martyred death,
I hope to live again with each morning breath.
I might be hurdled but I may not stop,
With bullet shots zooming past my head,
Whatever I see is like imagery of the rest,
Shattered souls in the pool of blood shed,
“martyr feeling is the best”, taking his last breath he said.
I guess liberalising myself from the deadly commotions,
Would feel like being trapped a little more,
Clamping my hands to the rigid limitations,
It’s like assassinating the bird that freely soars.
Almighty, I wish that day doesn’t come,
When all my beliefs turn into none,
My greatest sacrifice is the more I give,
To lay down my life,
So someone else may live……
©fountainhues. All rights reserved.
How well you expressed your feelings from the vision of a soldier. this was the most captivating poem on this topic. I have got more interested in exploring about this. Keep it up ritzee dear😘😘
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Thank youuu so much ma’am, this is a huge compliment ❤❤ I will try matching your expectations everytime 😇💕
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I like this! 🌼
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Thank you srijan😄
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I loved the whole scheme of rhyme and word selection justified the overall background of the rhyme…
It was awesome🤗
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Thank you so muchh, it’s beautiful to hear this. 😇😄
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Welcome… Keep writing 😊
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It is very good . I am really speechless . I don’t have words to describe this blog . What great writing ability. Hats off .
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Thanks a ton. This appreciation means a lot for me 😇😄
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No need for a thanx u deserve it
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Beautiful write up !!
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Thank youuu so muchh 🌹
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Thank youu😊
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well written rhyme..
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Thank you for stopping by and for following my blog!
I look forward to reading more of your very interesting, thought-provoking poems!
Blessings~
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Thank youu so muchh :’) 🌸
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You are very welcome!
🙂
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Wonderful. 🌸
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Thank youu😄
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Creative and flowing lines, a beautiful poem
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Thank youu so muchh 😇😄
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That’s great !!👌👌
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Thank youu 😊
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Most welcome
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Wow, the entire poem was brilliant but the end really hit home. Great work! 💖
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Thank youuu so muchh arbie💕
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This couldn’t be more beautiful 😍 keep up the great work 😊
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Thank youu sanskriti. means a lot 🌹❤
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You have duly encapsulated the entire life of a soldier into cluster of words.
From my perspective I perceive we’re all soldier fighting their own battle of freedom & sustaining stability.
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Thank youuu so muchh, your appreciation definitely means a lot.🌹😄 And yes, your perspective is absolutely true 🌸
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Pleasure is mine, ritzee…It’s delighting to hear that….
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This is perfect..The concept, rhyme scheme..fab❤️
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Thank youu so muchh, means a lot 🌹❤
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वंदे मातरम 🙏👑
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Yess vande mataram😇
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Lovely feelings.
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Lovely. Matured thoughts.
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Thank you so much 😇😄
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Very well. Keep trending
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Thank you ananya🌹
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beautiful piece of writing 🙂
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Thank youu😄
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hey i nominated you for mystery blogger award https://meshivangi857.wordpress.com/2017/10/22/mystery-blogger-award/
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You are very talented!😁
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Thank youu😆❤
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You’re welcome 😁
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Powerful and brilliant!
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Thank youu so muchh😇
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I am sure anyone starting Vision of Battle will not stop till they have reached the end…everything else can stop – it’s intense and deep.
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That’s a truly motivating compliment sir, thank you so much 😇😅
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Are you into armed forces? Or anyone from family… Beautiful
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No ma’am I have just completed my 12th and none of my family members is in armed forces😄
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In that case what an incredible imagination you have, young lady! God bless. Keep it up
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Thank youu so muchh ma’am❤ means a lot 😇
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Felt like a soldier while reading it. Amazingly written!
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Purpose is purely served! Thank you so muchh 😇😅
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Really beautiful poetry
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Thank youu so much😇
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U r wlcm
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Beautiful
Very well written!
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Thank youuu😄
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very powerful but it makes me think that if all humans were kind no one would have to suffer like soldiers do !
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Absolutely true! I agree. Thank youu😄😇
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That’s quite provocative, I like it. Thanks for following my blog.
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Sentiments succinctly expressed. Salute.
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Thank you so muchhh😄😇
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Thank you for your visit and I congratulate you for your great words, she makes you thoughtful, and I wish you all the best in your plans with your blog good luck and success for the future ,,(*L*) !!!!
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Thank youuuu for your wishes 💙
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Thank you, thank you,
Please gladly made !!! that pleases me very much !!!!✨🤩
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Sorry, did not get you? 😄
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Wonderful.
Thanks for the visit & Welcome.
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I nominated you for the Liebster Award. Check my recent post 😁
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DAMN GUD!!!
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Thank you pankhudi 💙
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❤
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So good. Nice use of words, And they way you described limitations
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Thank youuu rachel😄💙
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How well expressed…. Nice
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Thank youuu😄
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That’s beautiful!
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Thank you vinayak! 😄😇
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Would be sharing your posts on Twitter so would like to add your handle to the tweets. If it’s not an issue, could you tell me your handle?
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So beautifully written !
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Thank youu ayesha💙😄
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Goosebumps! Great piece 🙂
Cheers & do pen more such poems 🙂
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