This is a poem describing the feelings of those kids who are compelled to work as a labour in their juvenescence.
Why should I still agonise,
Shattered destiny had played its role all my life,
My infancy had already evanesced,
Crushing my will under their feet, the devils retraced.
They took my pen and gave me hammer,
Stole my words and made me stammer,
My dusty feet had never felt the warmth of shoes,
The Grey cloud had nabbed my canvas hues.
Sunken eyes look for a pipe dream,
The weather – beaten hands still want to write,
Feet on sun – baked mud, hop in pain,
Prompting to take me away from their sight.
Getting frequent cacoethes,
Of meeting my makers,
And asking him once, is this what he sent me here for?
For working over all the tedious chores?
Why doesn’t anyone hear my voice?
My silence shrieks louder than your aloyse,
Take me out of this living hell,
Hiding from them, in the caves I dwell….
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Sad indeed!
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Yes, totally tragic!
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Ritzee your lines show that you got emotionally connected to them . This strong message should be felt by all of us. Well done dear !!!! ๐๐
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Thank youu so muchh ma’am โคโค your appreciation is really precious for me โค I hope I live up to your expectations everytime ๐๐
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Sad but true reality …well penned
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Thank youu so much bhavana ๐ and yes harsh circumstances for those kids.
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Calls up the emotions. Really deep and sad. Lovely post.๐บ๐ท
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Indeed! It’s the bitter reality. Btw thank youu so muchh kip walkin๐๐
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You are welcome dear!๐ท๐บ
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Tragic penned very vividly. Nice one.
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Thank you so much๐๐
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very touching….. beautiful…..
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Thank youu so muchh ๐๐
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Wow, so much emotion in this….I am touched by the words, every sentence and every verse. Amazing how you can write and feel the pain, this was a wonderful piece that was sorrowfully beautiful.
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Your comments are always full of motivation sir. Thank youu so muchh, I feel happy that my poem was able to convey atleast a part of what those kids feel. ๐๐
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You’re awesome!๐
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perfectly awesome !๐
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Well your application of words is really awesome.
And i still need to work on my emotions.
And you write about social and other matters too but I write only on love and heart breaks .
I need to write on other things too.
So you are kind of inspiration maybe.
I will try to improve too.
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Means a lot thank you so muchh ๐๐
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My pleasure miss.perfection .
Well if you write perfectly then you are perfection for me ๐
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Excellent! Your choice in words and the imagery you create alongside the empathy you draw out of the reader is fantastic.
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Thank you so muchh arbie for a lovely comment like this! ๐โค
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Very strong message out there in lines. Lots of emotions.
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Thank you so much means a lot๐๐
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this is so strong, i loved the idea.
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Thank you so much laiba๐๐
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On innocence cryness is a big problem in many countries.what is dt shameful thing in dis developed world.well written,dear!!
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Thank youu so muchh๐๐
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Welcome ,dear!!
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Sad reality!
You penned very well !
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Indeed it is! Thank you so muchh ๐๐
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Speechless
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Thank youuu so muchh ๐๐
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This is a deep, sad, but lovely post hun!
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Thank youu so muchh, means a lot โค๐
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Fabulous one
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Thank youu so muchh ๐
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i am speechless, very well written, keep it up!!!
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Thank youu so muchh means a lot ๐
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Very sad although nicely written words. Thank you for stopping by my blog. You are a very good poet ๐
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That’s the greatest compliment ๐ thank you so much for appreciating it๐น
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An awesome depiction of cruelty on child labourers.
I liked it.
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Thank youu so muchh ๐๐
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Gotta say your poems are amazing ๐
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Thank youu so muchh ๐
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Wonderful and sad at the same time.
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Indeed! Thank youu๐
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Nicely written.
Thanks for the followed as well, blessing to you.
Rose
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Thank youuu for the blessings ma’am๐๐
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Most welcome!
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well expressed lovely
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Thank youuu๐
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Pathetic reality..Excruciatingly beautiful..โฅ๏ธ
Very well done..
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Thank youu anjiโค
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Thats a noble thought. Good.
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Thank youu๐
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Beautiful, highly emotional and thought provoking poetry.
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Thank you so much ma’am โค
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As a mother I really felt this one.Very sad.
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Thank youu๐โค
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Sorrowfully beautiful..
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Thank you surbhiโค
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Child labor is such an important thing to talk about. Thank you for writing about it.
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Thank you for appreciating my efforts! There is more to come๐๐
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I sure do hope so
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Reblogged this on aprรจs-pensรฉes.
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Thank youuu sirr๐๐
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Happy New Year!
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A veryy happy new year to youu too sir! ๐
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Thank you so much. Best wishes!
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Wow! This is breathtakingly touching. Almost felt like reading Oliver Twist! Esp. This… They took my pen and gave me hammer,ย
Stole my words and made me stammer,ย
My dusty feet had never felt the warmth of shoes,ย
The Grey cloud had nabbed my canvas hues.
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This is probably the best thing i could hear for my workโค getting my work compared to the work of the great writer charles dicken is the biggest motivation for me! Thank you so muchh for your beautiful words๐๐
I hope my work continues to touch all of youu๐
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How have you been, lil one?
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send me your emaill
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