Daunting dreams… ๐Ÿ‘ฟ

The world is passing by, 

With every minute you sigh, 

Random thoughts muzzling the truth away, 

No verdicts, no hearings for your say.

Minds humming with the shrillness of albatross, 

All anxieties buildings up its smutty gross, 

The Sombre of the night haunting your solace, 

Burrying all the dues of how you carried your grace.

The sound of the falling stones broke the silence of night, 

The commotion of the clashes growing bigger to your sight, 

Each muffled murmur slightly gives a hint 

That your flickering mirror gives your own glint. 

Somewhere at the end, the thoughts will reach a standstill, 

And the silence will grab your peace, 

When mind goes blank, 

And the world fast asleep, 

And you’ll realize how alone you would be, 

When no one is there to witness the disasters you see.

ยฉfountainhues. All rights reserved. 


Poetic wanderer

63 thoughts on “Daunting dreams… ๐Ÿ‘ฟ

  1. So very true, with every breath you take something is happening. A magnificent way to open with such a profound statement. Mr. Sandman sure does make movies doesn’t he? Living the dream while we’re still asleep๐Ÿ™‚. I loved reading every bit of this, great work!

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      1. Your comment was flattering๐Ÿ˜‚, especially the sir part. It was already awesome, to match my expectations is simply to write from the โค๏ธ. This is for you. ๐ŸŒน. For a lovely ode.

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      1. That is really generous of you to ask for advice from me, but even I am new here, i don’t know if I could give valuable advice to you. I would suggest you to speak to some senior writers here regarding blog. I am sure it would be helpful ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„

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      2. That is you just degrading your value here and that too for no reason. You really have a great passion in you and I just hope you could help me as I haven’t even reached your level yet. And as you know “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So it would be really grateful of you if you could.

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      3. I just read one of your posts and the article is beautiful, and your presentation too, I would just advise you to keep writing, if not possible daily, you can write it once in a week but just don’t leave it aside, it would get eventually even more beautiful.๐Ÿ˜Š and thank you for your kind words but we are all equal here๐Ÿ˜„

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      4. Yes actually I would have written one post everyday but as I m in my 12th so I don’t get much time and so I have made up a rule for myself to posts one posts every week by any means. And so now I had just one more favour from you and that is whenever you get will you just give a read to all my blogs and I would certainly love any opinions or advice on those so that I can improve for better. Please that’s a humble request from my side and I’d be honoured if you’d do that for me. And yes thanks again for giving so much of your precious time to me by replying to my comments.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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