Life has been gravel all this while,
Stuffs ruining your peace at your aisle,
Making you for go the charm you had,
Destiny being even bitter than your scad,
Then a time came,
When whatever mattered sounded lame,
Mercy you didn’t need any,
Hatred you didn’t feel any,
Circumstances grew the cogent in you,
You sounded more reasonable than you thought you do,
Your pain made you so tenacious,
Even the biggest of stones couldn’t break you. ❤😇
©fountainhues
Wow.. ❤️
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Thank you Gaurav lokhande 😄😁
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Awesome 👌👌
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Thank youu sujata mam❤❤
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Nice one ritika
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Thank you shubhamd96😄
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Shubhamd96 is my ID…my name is just shubham 😂😂
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Beautiful lines!
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Thank you so much 😁😄
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Well written. 🙂
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Thank youuu 😄😃
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You’re welcome. 😁
P.S. Thanks for the follow, btw.
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It’s beautiful.. particularly the quality of words that you’ve used in such a sophisticated manner
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Means a lot thank youu so muchh😄😊
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Beautiful and pretty expressive!! 😀
Also, I feel so happy that both of us added up to the lists of our followers as the 100ths. ^.^
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Haha yess. I am glad about it too😅 thank you so much😄😀
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Motivational poem it is !
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Thank youu so muchh 😁😁
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Wow how beautiful! I can relate to it😊
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Thank youuu Natasha 😄😊
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😊
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Amazing poem❤🙂
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Thank youuu ❤😁
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Nice BLOG ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank youu so much ❤😀
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It’s so beautiful! brought a smile to my face 🙂
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Thank youu meet😁😄
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Beautiful poem Ritika, thanks for the following my blog!!!
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Thank youuu sir😄😀
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So hopeful and positive, I like 🙂
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Thank youu sir😄😁😁
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🙂🙂
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thank YOU for following my blog 🤗
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My pleasure sir😊
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Great poem. Well done.
Shreyans
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Thank youu shreyans 😁😊
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#deep 👌✌
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Thank you shrey😀
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That’s an amazing poem. I have just one word for it. WOW💜
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Thank you so muchh mehul 😇😄
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Your welcome buddy😊😊
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Beautiful :’)
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Thank youuu😊😇
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🙂
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Beautiful sentiment.! Can’t wait to read more of your posts. Thank you for the blog follow too 🙂
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Thank you so much 😇😄
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Beauuuutiful write up ritika !!
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Thank youu so muchhh😇😄❤
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Clever use of words. I like how you follow the stone theme through.
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Thank youu so muchh means a lot😄❤
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your work is awesome 💖
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Thank youu so muchh😇😅😅
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Welcome😂
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Absolutely amazing! You are so talented and the sensibility behind your words is heart touching. Thank you for following my blog and for giving me the opportunity of discovering your poetry!
Blessings,
Claudia
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Thank you soo muchh Claudia. 😅 your appreciation really means a lot😄❤
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You have a good blog.
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Thank youu 😄😁
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From concerns of life to a hope..A positive approach.. loved it.😊
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Thank youu so muchh😇😄
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Just wow
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Bonjour
Mon Ami AMIE
Il était une fois des gentils bisous
Qui voulaient parcourir le monde
et voir ses merveilles …
Soudain, au détour de la vie
ils ont rencontré ton Amitié
Alors sur ta joue
ils se sont posés, et sont restés
Je te souhaite une bonne
et merveilleuse journée
Suivie d’une douce soirée
Bisous.
Bernard
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Expressions is powerful – actually when we are very very hard situation .. we can make beautiful poems 🙂
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Thank youu😄
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Very, very well-written. It seizes one’s attention. Also, thank you for your interest in my poetry, as well I look forward to reading more from you ! ….Jeff
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Thank you for your lovely words😄 and for appreciating my blog 🌹
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Your poems are very ‘straight from the heart’
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Can relate to it. Strong and beautiful collection of words. And thanks for following the blog.
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Thank youu surbhi💚
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Beautifully written!! 👍
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