All living a life under control,
Worrying and stressing over the future cure,
Preoccupied minds with just a little creativity left,
Childhood memories suffering a security check.
Just like a river loses its name to a sea,
He loses its purpose of life, hope and clemency,
Gets flown in the flood of innumerable questions,
Expectations and judgment ruining his ambition.
Coming out of the inevitable rattrap, he realizes,
It was he who complicated his life choices,
Having been thrown decades back,
He wondered where in his hardwork did he ever lack. ๐
ยฉfountainhues
Awesome poem๐
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Thank youuu so muchh๐โค
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After long, I’m going through a blog like what i like the most,simple yet effective
Beautiful! Mesmerizing words ๐
Keep the flow going…
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Means a lot thank you so muchh๐๐
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Good explanation of maturity .
Childhood memories suffering a security check.
Just like a river loses its name to a sea,ย
This line is touching .
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Thank youu so muchh, this motivates me to write more ๐๐
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Pleasure is mine ๐you deserve this all
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I just loved to read your poems, I am delighted by this visit and wish you all the very Best.๐ท
Shiva
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Thank you so much sir your words mean a lot to me. ๐๐ธ
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Very impressive words on the set back of losing confidence in oneself, love how everything flowed together!๐น
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Thank youu so muchhh, it really means a lot ๐๐
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You’re very welcome. ๐
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